Love the title. The dialogue flows naturally and authentically while the Austen Texas moment leavens the subdued mood. It’s not clear to me how they know each other’s names at the end, though I like the fact that they’re two adjacent months.
Hahaha! Nice catch. I’m going to have to fix that. I had it in an earlier draft and I must of accidentally cut it while editing and I got so wrapped up in what happens between them I forgot the audience doesn’t know their names.
Love the title. The dialogue flows naturally and authentically while the Austen Texas moment leavens the subdued mood. It’s not clear to me how they know each other’s names at the end, though I like the fact that they’re two adjacent months.
Hahaha! Nice catch. I’m going to have to fix that. I had it in an earlier draft and I must of accidentally cut it while editing and I got so wrapped up in what happens between them I forgot the audience doesn’t know their names.